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	<description>A blog about good business writing and bad. Especially the bad. Because there&#039;s so much more of the bad.</description>
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		<title>By: Mike Morgan</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-647</link>
		<dc:creator>Mike Morgan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 May 2008 21:38:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>...i thought we had a deal? ...Is this a stunned silence or are you just fed up with me?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8230;i thought we had a deal? &#8230;Is this a stunned silence or are you just fed up with me?</p>
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		<title>By: Mike</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-527</link>
		<dc:creator>Mike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Nov 2007 14:13:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>... its all gone quiet over there ...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8230; its all gone quiet over there &#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Mike</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-485</link>
		<dc:creator>Mike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Nov 2007 12:42:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is fun, isn&#039;t it?

Clare, perhaps you couold point me in the direction of some of your published reviews so that I might be the totally impartial judge of whether I believe in them or not ?  As you so rightly say - never over-estimate your reader ... and this reader is just a humble Hotelier, without a Phd.

M</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is fun, isn&#8217;t it?</p>
<p>Clare, perhaps you couold point me in the direction of some of your published reviews so that I might be the totally impartial judge of whether I believe in them or not ?  As you so rightly say &#8211; never over-estimate your reader &#8230; and this reader is just a humble Hotelier, without a Phd.</p>
<p>M</p>
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		<title>By: clare</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-483</link>
		<dc:creator>clare</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Nov 2007 11:15:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Welcome to my blog, Mike. 

As someone who&#039;s dabbled in restaurant reviewing, I know exactly how it works! But I usually thank my hosts by writing a review that isn&#039;t so unbelievable that readers will immediately twig that something&#039;s up. 

I also used to write sales copy for a book club and I seem to remember that whenever we mentioned both the good and bad points of a book, it sold more copies because people trusted our opinion more. 

I would love to come and sample some of your food in return for some well chosen words. I shall start planning my trip to Abergavenny right away!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome to my blog, Mike. </p>
<p>As someone who&#8217;s dabbled in restaurant reviewing, I know exactly how it works! But I usually thank my hosts by writing a review that isn&#8217;t so unbelievable that readers will immediately twig that something&#8217;s up. </p>
<p>I also used to write sales copy for a book club and I seem to remember that whenever we mentioned both the good and bad points of a book, it sold more copies because people trusted our opinion more. </p>
<p>I would love to come and sample some of your food in return for some well chosen words. I shall start planning my trip to Abergavenny right away!</p>
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		<title>By: Mike Morgan</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-476</link>
		<dc:creator>Mike Morgan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Nov 2007 08:32:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Clare, just found your blog when googling my hotel ... the one you suggest above that gave a free meal to that journo in order to garner a nice review.  Welcome to the real world!  Perhaps you would care to have dinner on me, try our &#039;under-seasoned and over-microwaved food&#039;, in exchange for a nice bit of your own copy, that I could use as a press release?  You have my email address. Mike</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Clare, just found your blog when googling my hotel &#8230; the one you suggest above that gave a free meal to that journo in order to garner a nice review.  Welcome to the real world!  Perhaps you would care to have dinner on me, try our &#8216;under-seasoned and over-microwaved food&#8217;, in exchange for a nice bit of your own copy, that I could use as a press release?  You have my email address. Mike</p>
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		<title>By: clare</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-328</link>
		<dc:creator>clare</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Apr 2007 16:23:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah . . . &#039;out of the box&#039; - that phrase always reminds me of when I used to write copy for what was supposed to be a fairly high-brow bookclub. 

During a brainstorm for a new direct marketing ad, the designer suggested &#039;Think outside the book&#039; as a headline. Despite my protestations that the line was insane - and implied we actually wanted people NOT to buy our books, the marketing team loved it and went for it.

But the most shocking thing of all? Response to the ad uplifted significantly - our audience clearly loved the line.

The lesson there is: never overestimate your reader.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah . . . &#8216;out of the box&#8217; &#8211; that phrase always reminds me of when I used to write copy for what was supposed to be a fairly high-brow bookclub. </p>
<p>During a brainstorm for a new direct marketing ad, the designer suggested &#8216;Think outside the book&#8217; as a headline. Despite my protestations that the line was insane &#8211; and implied we actually wanted people NOT to buy our books, the marketing team loved it and went for it.</p>
<p>But the most shocking thing of all? Response to the ad uplifted significantly &#8211; our audience clearly loved the line.</p>
<p>The lesson there is: never overestimate your reader.</p>
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		<title>By: Linda</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-326</link>
		<dc:creator>Linda</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Apr 2007 21:57:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just make sure they are all &quot;out of the box&quot;...as this is where we are supposed to think, I&#039;m told.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just make sure they are all &#8220;out of the box&#8221;&#8230;as this is where we are supposed to think, I&#8217;m told.</p>
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		<title>By: clare</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-321</link>
		<dc:creator>clare</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Apr 2007 08:35:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tears, temper tantrums, fragile egos . . . I think you could be right there!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tears, temper tantrums, fragile egos . . . I think you could be right there!</p>
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		<title>By: Umisenyamasen</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-320</link>
		<dc:creator>Umisenyamasen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Apr 2007 14:48:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Someone who is &#039;blue sky thinking&#039; sounds to me like someone who&#039;s thinking about pixies and fairies all day. And &#039;joined up thinking&#039; suggests someone who&#039;s just learnt to think at the level of a six-year old.

Thinking about it . . . I may have just described the entire creative industry!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Someone who is &#8216;blue sky thinking&#8217; sounds to me like someone who&#8217;s thinking about pixies and fairies all day. And &#8216;joined up thinking&#8217; suggests someone who&#8217;s just learnt to think at the level of a six-year old.</p>
<p>Thinking about it . . . I may have just described the entire creative industry!</p>
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		<title>By: clare</title>
		<link>http://www.dorisandbertie.com/goodcopybadcopy/2007/04/10/hard-to-stomach/comment-page-1/#comment-319</link>
		<dc:creator>clare</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Apr 2007 09:48:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>But &quot;joined up thinking&quot; only works if it&#039;s &quot;blue sky&quot; as well. That&#039;s the only way to come up with &quot;a truly tailor-made solution&quot; in my opinion.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>But &#8220;joined up thinking&#8221; only works if it&#8217;s &#8220;blue sky&#8221; as well. That&#8217;s the only way to come up with &#8220;a truly tailor-made solution&#8221; in my opinion.</p>
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